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W Whittling beloved arts of Poetry so tenderly carved,
O Obsidian flows, gentle fusions of delicate whispers,
R Reminiscent memories of future to come, souls' freedom,
L Lightness bestowed upon every cherished living being,
D Delicious realms of enchanting melodies, uniting most.
P Precious blessed curls dancing freely with each rising sun,
O Opaline visions of divine creations embracing all,
E Exquisite odes of life, reflecting upon its beauty.
T Tabernacle Twilights of Wonder, graced with wisdom,
R Resplendent heights, terrifying chasms of despair,
Y Yearning longingly for their message to be heard.
D Dainty arabesques forged with blood, tears, love and life,
A Ancestral echoes drift endlessly within pages of Time,
Y Yield to the infinite depth humans' blessed words hold.
O Obsidian flows, gentle fusions of delicate whispers,
R Reminiscent memories of future to come, souls' freedom,
L Lightness bestowed upon every cherished living being,
D Delicious realms of enchanting melodies, uniting most.
P Precious blessed curls dancing freely with each rising sun,
O Opaline visions of divine creations embracing all,
E Exquisite odes of life, reflecting upon its beauty.
T Tabernacle Twilights of Wonder, graced with wisdom,
R Resplendent heights, terrifying chasms of despair,
Y Yearning longingly for their message to be heard.
D Dainty arabesques forged with blood, tears, love and life,
A Ancestral echoes drift endlessly within pages of Time,
Y Yield to the infinite depth humans' blessed words hold.
World Poetry Day is on the 21st March 2013.
Written 25th February 2013.
Written 25th February 2013.
© 2013 - 2024 Kerriaa1
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The words are truly beautiful.
Just a quick comment on a few phrases:
"Reminiscent memories of future to come" might sound slightly better as
"Reminiscent memories of a future to come"
"Precious blessed curls dancing freely each rising sun - might work better adding
"dancing freely with (or under) each rising sun"
The possessive of it is "its". Using "it's" means "it is" - yes, it is one of those
oddball possessives.
I also suggest the possibility of replacing "abysses" with "chasms". Abysses doesn't
seem to fit quite right.
"Ancestral echoes drift endlessly within pages of Time" - smashingingly beautiful!!
Just a quick comment on a few phrases:
"Reminiscent memories of future to come" might sound slightly better as
"Reminiscent memories of a future to come"
"Precious blessed curls dancing freely each rising sun - might work better adding
"dancing freely with (or under) each rising sun"
The possessive of it is "its". Using "it's" means "it is" - yes, it is one of those
oddball possessives.
I also suggest the possibility of replacing "abysses" with "chasms". Abysses doesn't
seem to fit quite right.
"Ancestral echoes drift endlessly within pages of Time" - smashingingly beautiful!!